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Caught Awry

posted Oct 14, 2009, 11:11 PM by Sample User   [ updated Nov 27, 2009, 8:28 PM by Jonathan Sherwood ]

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It’s not like I’m suicidal or nothing, I just felt crappy and sort of felt like getting hit a lot might kinda knock it out of me. So I paid each of ‘em thirty bucks to do it, and the thing is the one guy probably would have done it for free. I mean he was that sledge-head type and all. I don’t mean to stereotype him just ‘cause he was really big. And had that dumb goatee and breathed through his mouth..."

Another very short one (about 2,000 words). This one is a modern riff on a classic literary character, perhaps with his prime trait amplified a bit and a healthy dose of my own mindset during college mixed in. And yes, it is supposed to be one, single paragraph.


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